Negative Photo Critique

For my negatives, number 8a was a little out of focus. The rest were in good focus.
Photo 9a and 10a are in great focus. Those two images have people giving an expression in both.

Jostens contest

Filling the Frame
I chose this image for the one with the filled frame because when I look at it, I look at the black wires sticking out of the golden medal pieces and i just follow where they go and it leads my eyes to a different part of the image. The first thing I see when I look at the image is the boy, then I see the wires and follow them until they are out of the image.










Action and Emotion


This photo shows great emotion and action because the boy that that has the lighter has a happy emotion on his face. The other boy with the glasses is making the action because of the fire that he created. So the boy with the glasses created the fire and the boy with the lighter has the great emotion.








































The Story






I think this tells a story about a teenage girl just going through high school. I think she's showing the people in the background moving at a faster motion because maybe she just wants to take it slow. She is the only one not moving at a fast motion which makes me think that maybe school is going by slow for her or she is struggling.

Inspiring

Contest:ATPI Environmental Self Portrait Contest

What makes this photo powerful to me is that I think the girl you see in the eye is maybe how you would see her in real life and if you look closely, you can see that smile on her face. The lighting is bright outside but exposure is in black and white. I think this person purposely took the picture of the eye with her standing in that exact position so you can see her face.

The Camera

What is same about my pinhole camera and an SLR Camera is that the pinhole and the lens on the camera do the same thing for your camera. What's different is that the SLR Camera has a lense that you can adjust while my pinhole camera can only get the exposure by the pin hole.

2 photo judging

This picture does not have a person in it. I can't really tell whats in focus except the right half of the window. The other half looks blury. I don't think the image is warped.

No person in the photo. The bridge in the photo is in focus and the tree to the left is kind of blury(out of focus.) The image is not warped but when an image is warped it looks curved.